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Birthdays will come, ...We can't make them go Some filled with excitement, some simply ho-hum Others we dread, because they remind us Of the swiftness of years, that are falling behind us It marks off the years, and the the day we were born… Acknowledgement comes in some custom or form Perhaps we must please, or try to conform …. to the norms of our peer's celebration. Perhaps if we're lucky,..a nice dinner to please a gift, or a chat.... a candle or cake... the singing “the” song…. There's nothing wrong with all that! But the older we get, no piñata to claim......no pictures to frame So to recall one “event”…this birthday I spent… Nice enough, I suppose …but the day decomposed We rushed to this place, on a workday eve. Not much time to dine, we'd be home by nine A restaurant table….just a few of us able No balloons, no cake, no candle, no flames But acknowledgement, just the same Over plates of ravioli…and eggplant parmesan So nice….. but did I notice a few yawns??? Then one special moment, that won’t be forgotten My little blonde grandson….who gave me a gift He reached into his pocket…with a shy little grin Said, “Here is Darth Vader….He is all that there is"…. And opened his hand, and his eyes so sincere And gave me a gift to remember for years... "It’s all that I have, I almost forgot I hope you will like him..... I like him a lot.. "But he's yours if you like him….It's all that I’ve got." "Happy Birthday Grandma…." Happy Birthday To Me !! ______________________________________________________ For "Birthday Party Contest: Sponsor Nayda Ivette Negron Revised 2/9/16

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Date: 2/14/2016 5:37:00 PM
No male child parts with Darth Vador without a great deal of love swaying him. Such sweet words, such a dear gift. Before I gush more about something that may be fiction, let me say I enjoyed the poem - good description of adult birthdays followed by a precious memory capture! CayCay
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Date: 2/11/2016 10:15:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats in Nayda's "Birthday Party win." Love LINDA
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Date: 2/11/2016 8:54:00 AM
Very well done, Carrie. My grandson is also into Star Wars big time, so that resonated.
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Date: 2/11/2016 4:31:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Carrie!
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Date: 2/11/2016 4:13:00 AM
Ahhhh sweet! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/10/2016 8:39:00 PM
Carrie, you made me get a tear :'( children are amazing. Congratulations on your win!!!
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Date: 2/10/2016 8:14:00 PM
A very warm story, Carrie, the kind of grandson every grandmother dreams of. Congratulations on you win.
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Date: 2/10/2016 6:19:00 PM
Such a darling grandson. Reminds me of the little son I had years ago. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/10/2016 5:37:00 PM
oh Carrie this is so touching - I had a lump in my throat with your grandson's offering congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/10/2016 5:20:00 PM
A wonderful story. Congrats. BG
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Date: 2/10/2016 5:12:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Carrie
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Date: 3/3/2013 12:22:00 PM
Carrie just trawling through some old poems, I love this one and am ow very hungry....David
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Date: 2/25/2011 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie,on your win in Joyce Johnson's contest "Emotional Response". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2011 11:16:00 PM
Very emotional write here Carrie.Enjoyed.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/23/2011 4:58:00 PM
GO Carry wonderful write I think it was too upbeat to win higher! OH well THANKYOU THANKYOU!!all this sad is too sad! Great kid there! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/23/2011 4:31:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your wonderful win in Joyce's contest with this dynamic entry .. another wonderful win for u to enjoy with luv..
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Date: 2/22/2011 8:54:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Carrie. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/22/2011 8:31:00 PM
Joyce did like this one, Carrie. Congratulations on winning in her contest with this fine entry.
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Date: 2/22/2011 8:24:00 PM
Beautiful, just beautiful.Many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 2/22/2011 7:56:00 PM
this stirs the mind and engages the feelings, carrie… KUDOS to you for king-sized win, :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/22/2011 7:33:00 PM
LThis is very sweet Carrie. Congratulations. Love, joyce
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Date: 2/15/2011 9:42:00 AM
What a beauty sweet Carrie,lovely.
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Date: 2/15/2011 7:48:00 AM
how amazingly surprising this can be, carrie.. i love the way this was deftly dveloped to come to a delightful ending! wishes for a great win! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/15/2011 5:38:00 AM
Very emotional piece of poetry, Carrie Good luck in the contest,
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Date: 2/14/2011 9:13:00 PM
S*M*I*L*E ~ "H*A*P*P*Y V*A*L*E*N*T*I*N*E*S D*A*Y M*Y D*E*A*R,,,B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L```C*A*R*R*I*E R*I*C*H*A*R*D*S¤¤¤'L*O*V*E,,,J*O*H*N!!!:))) ~
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