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One Bad Day

It all started out as a bad day A day full of hate Full of hurt And Now its a the final straw I cant take any more I'm taking it Making it Forming it into my fist full of rage my war waging tool of destruction Fixing and destroying killing and re birthing And it was all started by One bad day

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Suzanne Smith

Date: 4/11/2011 9:47:00 AM

This is one of your better ones. Keep writing and I will keep reading.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/15/2009 9:44:00 AM

precise to the point as is the topic and the verse. Nice write. Light & Love

Mickey Pig Knuckles

Date: 3/27/2009 9:58:00 AM

Christian, everyone has a bad day at times with some more than others. Is it a fluke or is it karma striking us back. Could it possibly be what we may be projecting outwards towards the world or could it just be a bad day in deed. Either way your poem is wonderfully composed as I say thanks for sharing once again... MPK