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One Autumn Night

Sky turns red as the sun sets on an Autumn evening Night comes bringing in a slight chill I see the ruddy moon leaning over a hedge Like a red-faced farmer Crisp fall air sets the night Changed-color leaves' song roars Round about are the wistful stars. +++ September 6, 2014 Form: Free Verse Dr. Ram mehta Tenth Place win Contest: One Autumn Night by P.D. My Inspiration is picture No.3

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2014 12:15:00 AM

oh I love that part, the ruddy moon likened to a red faced farmer. Awesome!!

Joseph May

Date: 12/28/2014 9:42:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win Dr Ram

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/27/2014 4:16:00 PM

Congratulations, Dr. Ram, on another well-deserved win! I love the amazing imagery! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/27/2014 1:12:00 PM

absolutely beautiful - many congrats:-) hugs Jan x

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/27/2014 12:08:00 PM

congratulations Dr. M on another win much deserved

Edward Ebbs

Date: 12/27/2014 11:20:00 AM

Congrats, Dr. I love Autumn's crisp air :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/27/2014 10:06:00 AM

DR RAM, it's an honor having your poem on my winning list. Congratulations on your win in my Autumn Night's contest. A blessing it is to be back. I love nothing more than a free feeling of falling leaves drifting away at night. Thank you for the supporting one of my many soup contest. Stop by my latest blog "Together Alone" if you'd like. No problem if you don't have time. Just take this time and enjoy your win... LOVE LINDA

Elaine George

Date: 9/9/2014 10:31:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful. Sure to top the winners list, my friend. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/7/2014 12:22:00 PM

Dr. Ram, this has got to be one of the most amazing poems I have seen from you for descriptive writing of a nature scene. Wow, I love it!! the red faced farmer, what a great line too.

Mohammad Taha Effendi

Date: 9/6/2014 10:35:00 PM

Your use of metaphors makes this one special. Most of what i write reflects death and decay but through poets such as you, I have realized that there is so much beauty in poetry and in nature! Thank you for your kind comments on my poem winning "Any 5 line Poem" by Poet Destroyer.

Keith Merritt

Date: 9/6/2014 10:34:00 PM

The leaves are turning red already where I sit. In a month it will be as you describe ! A win is in your future, Doctor ! Thanks for the prescription...I feel better already.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/6/2014 10:37:00 AM

This Autumn Night is filled with beautiful imagery! This definitely a winner! Pandita

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/6/2014 9:31:00 AM

Pretty :) I like it, best of luck honey

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/6/2014 6:28:00 AM

Ahhh!! We are not quite there yet..It is still hot here..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara