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One Autumn Day

One Autumn Day One cloudless, bright color-splashed Autumn day, as a sunny sky frivolously frolicked with butterflies of iridescent blue, and trees exploded with flaming colors of burnt orange, red, and yellow, she rested on a soft bed of freshly-fallen leaves near a golden pond. In her reflection, she saw the spirited girl she once was, the brash nymph who uninhibitedly loved the sun god, amorous Helios, with glorious memories of one Autumn day forever engraved in her heart. 09-11-2014 Contest: One Autumn Day (In Just 7 Lines) Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Placement: 9th

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2014 11:29:00 PM

Wonderful alliteration, pandita! Some great lines in this Autumn poem. Congrats for your win.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/29/2014 10:05:00 AM

Thank you so very much, dear Andrea, for kindly complimenting my work! It is always good to receive your encouraging feedback and support! I wish you a happy and fulfilling 2015! Pandita.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2014 6:27:00 PM

Thanks once again for the comment on my comment...PD

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/28/2014 5:34:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win, and to fav this sweet write.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/29/2014 10:04:00 AM

Maurice, I always appreciate your kind comments and thank you for complimenting my work by including in your faves. Best wishes for a happy New Year! Pandita.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/28/2014 11:41:00 AM

I love this Pandita,congrats on the win...huggs

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/28/2014 3:59:00 PM

My friend, I thank you for stopping by and leaving your wonderful congratulations which I appreciate! Best wishes, Pandita.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/28/2014 11:02:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Pandita:-) Hugs jan xxx

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/28/2014 3:58:00 PM

Thank you dear Jan for your congratulations and continued support! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2014 10:16:00 AM

nice win lady, thank you for the support. PD

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/28/2014 3:57:00 PM

Hi Linda, thank you so very much for placing me in your contest! I was happy to participate and this was another fun one for me. Pandita.

John Matthews

Date: 10/20/2014 10:08:00 AM

great imagery I can almost see the girl by the water

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/20/2014 12:10:00 PM

Hi John, I am so delighted by your comment and compliments! Thank you, my friend! Pandita

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 10/8/2014 9:52:00 AM

Superlatively written Pandita.... Rated 7! Verlena

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/8/2014 11:16:00 AM

My dear Verlena, thank you so very much for kindly complimenting my work with such a high rating! It is always good to receive your encouraging feedback and support! Have a wonderful day, my friend! Pandita

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 9/29/2014 9:02:00 AM

I truly love the imagery of this piece...excellent write. Thanks for the inspiration!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/29/2014 2:44:00 PM

I thank you kindly, my friend, for your wonderful compliments! Have a lovely week! Pandita

Madhavi Sp

Date: 9/24/2014 6:01:00 AM

Well written Pandita..Loved your imagination. @madhavi

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/24/2014 9:45:00 AM

Hi Madhavi, thank you so very much for complimenting this piece; and I am very glad that you enjoyed it! Enjoy your day! Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 9/14/2014 5:11:00 AM

This is a lovely write, Pandita, where mythology and imagery go hand in hand. Sweet memories like these are meant to last forever! gl in contest. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/14/2014 5:51:00 PM

Thank you so very much, dear Paul, for kindly complimenting my work! It is always good to receive your encouraging feedback and support! Have a wonderful day, my friend! Pandita

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/13/2014 4:07:00 PM

vividly expressed.. you make autumn glow, pandita.. huggs

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/13/2014 9:24:00 PM

Hi Nette, I so very much appreciate your kind compliments. Many thanks to you, my friend! Pandita

Thvia Shetley

Date: 9/13/2014 3:11:00 PM

Ooh, you're a story-teller. I love it!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/13/2014 9:23:00 PM

Hi Thvia, thank you so very much for complimenting this piece; and I am very glad that you enjoyed it! Have a great weekend! Pandita

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/13/2014 12:33:00 PM

A pleasure to read this one my friend. I love the mythology and very descriptive scene you've painted. Good luck in the contest my friend!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/13/2014 2:28:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Robert, for kindly complimenting my work! It is always good to receive your encouraging feedback and support! Have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita

Race Benoit

Date: 9/13/2014 8:34:00 AM

Well done! The descriptive words and phrases are as colorful and a gorgeous autumn day. The end of your work also intrigued me, depicting an older woman reflecting. (At least that is what I took from it.)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/13/2014 2:25:00 PM

Hi Race, thank you so very much for complimenting this piece; and I am very glad that you enjoyed it! You are also absolutely right about the ending. Have a great weekend! Pandita