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One Autumn Day

Walking along the lake under the trees brown Up comes the wind, the leaves tumbling down Furling and swirling as the wind comes puffing When Falling down make not the slightest sound Forming tapestry of scarlet, yellow, russet and brown I have never ever seen such beauty in any season Where the leaves look like flowers of different colors
+++ September 11, 2014 Form: Free Verse Dr. Ram Mehta Seventh Place Win Contest: One Autumn Day by P.D.

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Date: 5/27/2015 4:58:00 AM
Stunning and beautiful
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Date: 12/30/2014 6:11:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this beautiful winning poem, congrats Dr. Ram.
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Date: 12/29/2014 11:17:00 AM
Congrats on your win with placement, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 12/28/2014 11:24:00 PM
Big congrats to you on this fine entry in the fall day contest, Dr. Ram.
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Date: 12/28/2014 11:31:00 AM
Exactly Dr.,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 12/28/2014 10:59:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Dr Mehta:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 12/28/2014 10:15:00 AM
Dr Ram, Congratulations, on your win. Many enjoyable Autumn poem. Stop by my latest blog "Autumn's Gown" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/13/2014 7:13:00 AM
Very nice write Dr Ram...
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Date: 9/12/2014 6:38:00 PM
Very Beautiful Dr. Ram
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Date: 9/12/2014 12:07:00 PM
Very enjoyable read Dr. Mehta
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Date: 9/11/2014 10:53:00 PM
Beautiful colors,lovely feeling and a appreciative soul. Just what the doctor ordered for my dull uneventful day. Alofas, Tiaua.
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Date: 9/11/2014 6:43:00 PM
truly very beautifully painted picture dear friend
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Date: 9/11/2014 12:54:00 PM
you color my day, dr. ram... just beautifully done!.. huggs
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Date: 9/11/2014 8:19:00 AM
I love this! right to my fav you have spoke to the joy of this season, beautiful! I love autumn and your poem, best of luck in the contest, its a winner to me;)
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Date: 9/11/2014 7:44:00 AM
This is surely autumn. To bad the poems can be only 7 lines, I was just getting started with mine.
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Date: 9/11/2014 7:06:00 AM
wonderful imagery Dr Mehta you have painted a beautiful picture. Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/11/2014 5:58:00 AM
Autumn is such a beauty. I enjoyed it in my childhood. But I have sad story to tell..now in a city where open sky is a luxury I do not find any smell of Autumn. So your poem evokes nostalgia. Thank you Mehtasaab. Love
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