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One and Hard Won

One and Hard Won Through the Lord's grace, Our eyes open to find a new day Brush strokes radiant where we love and pray Eager to witness life’s paintings unfold Evidence of His divine greatness that We behold A sparrow’s trill as it lights upon a fence The pewter and silver morning inviting raindrops to dance Of oleander leaves gently touching windowsills Majestic trees coaxing children to climb and fill Of the smell of toast and coffee to greet the awakening The warmth of His body and shallow breathing Eyes fluttering and dreaming behind closed lids My dream, His dream, Our dream complete Is One and hard Won, Two is Too no longer to repeat All are scenes of wondrous beauty sublime He and I, shall have all this in time. [p smith]

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Date: 3/21/2016 1:50:00 AM
Your gonna fit in great here,those three below are really awesome people and even better poets,Take care,look forward to your work.
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Date: 3/20/2016 10:58:00 PM
Sera, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and you're poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/19/2016 11:24:00 PM
Sera, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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