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A dromedary treks through the hot desert sands Its rider wears a patch over one eye In the distance a single palm tree stands As they seek an oasis under the desert sun In the unforgiving heat hallucinations are born The rider thinks he sees a unicorn To quench their thirst is their singular quest As under the sole palm tree they stop to rest They journey on at a slow rate of speed Just one oasis is all they need The one eyed man more than the beast One drop of water, just one drop at least Then the solitary rider sees something ahead He hopes its an oasis and not a mirage instead But this time it's the real thing He takes one sip at a time from this desert spring ---- 9/7/2015

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Date: 10/30/2015 7:14:00 AM
This is lovely and great! I miss your work my dear poet. Refreshing... so refreshing!!
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Date: 9/20/2015 2:38:00 PM
I see this one was a winner. BIG congrats, Joseph.
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Date: 9/14/2015 1:10:00 PM
Joseph, congrats on your wonderful win. SKAT love :)
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Date: 9/14/2015 4:37:00 AM
Superb take with this very lovely write Joseph n a great win ! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/12/2015 7:03:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/8/2015 11:52:00 PM
I like the unique way you did your ONE poem. this is a really great contest because the entries say so much about the writers.
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Date: 9/8/2015 4:41:00 PM
Joseph, this is wonderful for the one contest, a thirsty 7 and thanks for visiting my Cecil poem~~
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Date: 9/8/2015 11:26:00 AM
Your descriptive flows smoothly within heart of the readers. it depict an imagery that carry the readers mind and sense along.... Beautiful and excellence write........A.M.
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Date: 9/8/2015 8:24:00 AM
Excellent. Great imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 9/8/2015 7:35:00 AM
Such vivid imagery Joseph I think Rob will like this one - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/8/2015 12:39:00 AM
Yeah just one drop in desert can do wonders Joseph, wonderful write n great take on contest! Gl in contest!
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