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I will flow where the energy of love impels me to flow— just as wild rivers pursue the pull of the distant waves—to each kiss from the salt of the ocean— to become whole— One.

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Date: 12/3/2022 6:21:00 PM
Great write and inspiration, love it
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/3/2022 9:29:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kind words —Laura
Date: 2/12/2022 7:29:00 PM
Very shakspear beautiful write my friend To feel whole complete would be nice Davidscott xx
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/3/2022 9:28:00 PM
Means a lot to me David! Thanks so much. <3 —Laura
Date: 1/6/2022 10:13:00 AM
Good emphatically penned write here Laura.'
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/10/2022 2:15:00 PM
Appreciate your thoughts on this one, Joe. ~Laura
Date: 7/3/2021 7:59:00 AM
Salted kisses on the crest of a love deluge is a bliss crash...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/7/2021 1:16:00 AM
<3 bliss crash indeed, Justin. Always well said. ~Laura
Date: 6/14/2021 9:02:00 PM
Yes to feel whoe complete would be nice again beautiful peace well penned xx
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 6/17/2021 4:10:00 AM
Thanks david...I wish you a life full of love and completeness. <3 ~Laura

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