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Once Your Eyes

carrousel r c world i l c e spins s......s a d l y a pony you sat upon.................lookingthroughme, passing, as yesturdaysclowns............................................................................................................. ...............................andkaliopes........echo distant... ... tents (space once filled)... once your EyEs

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Date: 9/10/2009 5:20:00 AM
Creative!
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Date: 9/8/2009 12:30:00 PM
Keep writing we will keep reading. Excellent Orphani.....o. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2009 6:35:00 AM
i love your style ..different...love the ending..... echo distant ...tents..refuge--excellent--Charma
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Date: 9/7/2009 10:00:00 PM
Very nice, I like the unique style...Karla
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