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Once Wendy

Once, I wished Wendy was with me, Not him, not attracted to them, Who only saw her slim and trim Body; Naughty eyes between knees. If she could see what I could see, Though my eyes saw the sunrise dim, In a sky, whose demise looked grim, She would see we were meant to be. My heart, right from the very start, Desired a love like Wendy's; A love that was state of the art, Instead of one that was trendy. Unfortunately, for my heart, She could only see me friendly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/30/2012 11:23:00 AM
I love this! I'm sure everyone can relate to this kind of unrequited love. Very nice choice of rhymes. And thank you for your kind comments on my poems :)
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Date: 10/23/2012 11:57:00 AM
Wonderful reading your excellent poetry today Doc. Love, Carol
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