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Once Upon a Time

There stood a castle on the summit of a hill Now fallen to decay, hidden among bushes wild It perched like an eagle’s nest on the steep hill It was owned by a Lord, gentle and mild Blessed with a daughter, cute and sweet He brought her up with such punctilious care Proficient in all branches of learning, She was a miracle of accomplishments rare! She could sing n’ dance and play on the harp She knew how to sew and paint with wit so sharp With dazzling beauty and all feminine charms She was the cynosure of everyone’s eyes Needless to say, she was her dad’s darling And the craving of many young men’s lives Like a rose bud blushing on a thorny stem With years, she bloomed into a graceful dame Her father was keen to find for her a royal suitor After deliberate choice with her open assent To an eligible youngster she was formally betrothed For an abiding bond, they gave their consent In a tumult of emotions, the young pair met The groom was so charming, a man of noble breed A gallant cavalier with an arresting figure He came riding, riding on a black steed They stood gazing at each other as if entranced Their sprouting romance, everyone noticed Her moist blue eyes were coyly lifted up She spied him with rising elation Though she longed to utter honeyed words They dried up in her throat in a surge of emotion With a winsome smile playing upon her lips And a sweet dimpling of her cheeks Their love lit eyes conversed in sweet silence Feeling as if standing on joy’s highest peaks The royal marriage was to officiate Exactly one month since their first meeting Time slouched dragging along Each day seemed like eons creeping! Finally, the auspicious occasion arrived And everything was meticulously arranged! The fair bride was decked in all finery In her bridal gown she looked a fairy None could take their glance off Everyone deemed her the ideal one to marry To receive the gallant on horse back The royal guards stood in eager wait But Alas! Her prince didn’t turn up Nor got any tiding as to why he was late While the bride was seen so lost in reverie The castle throbbed in wild revelry The last rays of the sun had departed And bats began to flit by in dim light Night closed in, nothing stirred The bridegroom didn’t arrive, yet! Missive dreadful was received That the cavalier on his way to the castle Got attacked by Highway bandits barbarous Petrified stood the Lord and each of his vassal But he acted quick without wasting time His soldiers on horseback were sent far and wide Courageous men, they were, armed with swords and shield Seeing the army advancing, the bandits were afraid Leaving the princess to his cruel fate, They instantly fled, galloping away to a secret cove. The king’s men lifted the wounded prince And carried him to the castle as fast as they could move With dedicated care, the prince got back his health The princess stood by his side, nursing him like a mother Their love was once more blazoned brighter than before On an auspicious day, the princess got wed to her lover They lived happy ever after for long years in marital bliss And none could find in their relationship, any remiss * * * * * * * The castle still stands on the summit of the hill Now fallen to decay, buried among trees People say, they see a cavalier mounted on a black steed Riding to the castle at midnight like blowing breeze Many say, the ‘tlot’ ‘tlut’ sound of galloping Mingled with the tinkling sound of anklets loud Is heard when the wind whistles among the trees And the moon is veiled by the shrouding cloud!
October.7.2022 Tragi Comedy Poetry Contest Sponsor-Joe Maverick

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Date: 10/19/2022 7:49:00 AM
You have a lovely creative mind, my dear friend. Your poem of love, tragedy, and mystery was engaging and entertaining. A well written entry for the contest, Valsa. Good luck! Bill
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Date: 10/7/2022 3:05:00 PM
What delightful and intriguing poetry, the wording and rhyme are kept in a magnificent way throughout, and everyone has found pleasure together ever since. I'm drawn to the upbeat manner in which the discussion is wrapped up. Best regards, Valsa.
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Date: 10/7/2022 11:25:00 AM
Wow! You have been busy! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 10/7/2022 9:14:00 AM
Your imagination and storytelling are quite outstanding here Valsa, even the wording and rhyme are all captured in old chivalrous language, and they all lived happily ever after, what an entertaining piece, A big contender for the contest methinks, cheers David
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Date: 10/7/2022 7:01:00 AM
What an intriguing story! I like the happy ending. Best to you, Valsa.
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Date: 10/6/2022 10:46:00 PM
A wonderful story. You are outdoing me with such tales. Best for a win.
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