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Once Upon a Poetic Moon

The carpet's paid for; God Bless the TV, it keeps us informed. Cosy in our little room with the curtains drawn one thing's for certain, we still have our window on the world Slowly we've slipped into 'couch-potato-hood' Rarely, we fight, over which shows are good You hold the remote,"It's understood." Flip, flip, you change channels, searching for a show with some meaning to you, while I with books piled high beside me, sit oblivious- searching for meaning in poetry I battle with inadeqate words against the TV's droning tune Some night I'll write one that shoots holes in the moon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/11/2022 9:41:00 PM
Great description. Very beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/11/2022 11:15:00 AM
What a terrific slice of life SuZ! This sounds like our TV evenings only somewhere between 9 and 10 I take the remote because hubbie has fallen asleep. It makes a nice compromise. I guess that's what marriage is really about after all. Love your last line. Congrats on your win. Looking forward to seeing "holes in the moon."
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/21/2022 10:08:00 AM
Thanks for your thoughtful comment, Sam: Compromise is right…lol. Luckily I have that alternative private world where I don’t need a remote. SuZ
Date: 7/15/2013 10:51:00 AM
Ha! This was an enjoyable read! A lot of joy & playfulness here. =D
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Date: 7/14/2013 1:35:00 AM
this is such an awesome little peek into your home life, I think!! In my house it is opposite. I let hubbie sit down there with his westerns all evening while i do dinner and dishes and then when I am there for the night, the remote is in MY little hands because hubbie does not even know how to record shows yet and has no interest. So I record all the stuff we watch. haha. (i have to watch SOME things on my own though. He won't tolerate Bachelor) I sure enjoyed this poem of yours.
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Date: 7/13/2013 4:02:00 AM
- Hi Suz........ BRAVO !!! - Love it.... unique poem ! - Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/13/2013 12:03:00 AM
This is original, Suz..!! a very unique poem. I like the way you describe the "disturbed mood atmosphere" in such a cute way ;)
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