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Once There Was Ramsir

Once there was a professor called Ramsir His knowledge grew lesser and stressor Understanding grew too small Wasn’t bashful above all That’s why he’s a renowned philosopher. In rounds and circles he’s going a lot Going back and forth for things he forgot Gets half way here and there He becomes quite aware And his reasons for going round are shot. +++++++ May 19, 2014 Form: Limerick (42+42=84 syllables) Dr. Ram Mehta Second Place win Contest: Birthday and Aging humor by Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 5/29/2014 6:09:00 PM
DR RAM,,, Double Congrats on Carolyn’s birthday contest. Many smiles, on its future feature in her birthday booklet. XOX~ Linda
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Date: 5/29/2014 4:15:00 PM
LOL! Congratulations on a fantastic win, Dr. Ram! Annalise
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Date: 5/27/2014 10:54:00 PM
Good humor in this write, Dr. Ram. Well done! Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest!
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Date: 5/27/2014 9:36:00 PM
It's quite funny. Congrats, Dr.Ram!!
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Date: 5/27/2014 9:55:00 AM
Witty self-digging humour! Congrats on a deserved win DR. // paul
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Date: 5/26/2014 8:40:00 PM
Dr Ram, Congratulations, in Carolyn's "Birthday and Aging Humor" contest. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/26/2014 7:08:00 PM
Thank you for a great read and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/26/2014 7:07:00 PM
A fine write my friend, congrats on the win!!
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Date: 5/26/2014 4:36:00 PM
Dear Dr. Ram, Great write! The second verse is featured in the birthday booklet. Congratulations on your win and thanks for participating in a contest to wish some special ladies happy birthday. Love, Carolyn
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 5/27/2014 5:37:00 AM
Thanks, Carolyn, for the appreciation
Date: 5/20/2014 3:52:00 PM
It's pretty good, Dr. Ram. some of the lines are too long for limericks, but I enjoyed reading this.
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Date: 5/19/2014 8:28:00 AM
ha ha...
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