Once More

Shall we meet again In a new and different place When I see you in the future Will I recognize your face I know your heart The feelings you keep from me Why are you hiding what you feel Do you not want me to see We are no longer Who we were before Will I know you When I answer the door Is there going to be Another meeting in our world Shall we hug once more Will the flag once more be unfurled

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/10/2014 1:12:00 AM

Bad Mama bear, stay away from those flag bearers *lol*

Mama Bear
Date: 11/10/2014 8:01:00 PM

Glad you and Jan got the reference!! Need to see if there are any flag bearers out there. Just got a new flag!!!LOL Love Mom

Jan Allison

Date: 11/6/2014 2:00:00 AM

There are more questions than answers - a touching poem Mamabear - the last line made me smile... I remember a poem about a flagpole! Hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/6/2014 7:52:00 AM

Ha ha ha Mama bear you do need make sure its not flying at half mast:-) hugs Jan xxx

Mama Bear
Date: 11/6/2014 7:49:00 AM

Excellent Jan!! That was the purpose of the write We need to know if there is still a pole for the flag Hugs and kisses dear lady Edith

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/5/2014 11:00:00 PM

I really enjoyed reading your lovely poem Edith. I have asked these same questions at times. I also as Dorian feel a sort of sadness in your poem. XOXO

Mama Bear
Date: 11/6/2014 7:46:00 AM

Brenda thank you. There is sadness as well as joy. There can not be one without the other. Hope to see you soon Hugs Edith

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/5/2014 10:06:00 PM

Wow! Excellent poem! I really enjoyed it. I can detect a lot of sadness in it, mama bear. (Edith:)and thank you so much my dear friend, for visiting my pages and for your very sweet and awesome caring comments you left me. So sorry to hear that went in the past thru some similar and very sad experience like mine. Just glad that you found happiness again. Your comments touched my heart to the core and made me cry. And you're sweet and so right, I know. I'll be back! :) love and hugs! xxx D.

Mama Bear
Date: 11/5/2014 10:23:00 PM

Dorian you will find happiness. You need to leave yourself open to the possibility.Don't let one man ruin life for you. Thanks for the visit and much love and luck to you Edith