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Once Loved

Where has our love gone? A love that was once there More profound than the heavens Brighter than the stars, A love filled with the fondness, A love that was but yours and mine. Then came that day When you abandoned me, Left me stranded midway— Alone and lonely! Forsaken and forlorn I wondered why? Our love was to last forever, Where did I go wrong? If you would but seek once again the sweet path to my once-loved embrace, If you weep for me and wishes to kiss me I would pardon your perfidy… Maybe, the love there was once is now long gone, never to return. ~Contest: Inspired by a song, "Once there was a love." ~Sponsored: JCB Brul

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Date: 11/12/2022 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win. You have created a beautiful love- poem - sad, but poignant !
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Date: 10/21/2022 2:17:00 PM
Very well done, Abdul. That was funny when you said on my poem that it did not sound like Andrea. In one way it was kind of true, but you are right, it was nothing like the way I exaggerated it!
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Date: 10/21/2022 9:40:00 AM
Amen, I do know one love that will never give up or leave untill we take our last breath, love ya
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Date: 10/20/2022 8:03:00 PM
Such a sad verse, Abdul. Good luck in the contest. Many blessing my friend from all of Halloween.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/21/2022 9:32:00 AM
Thanks Eve.

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