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Once Lost

The wind whirls a fallen leaf away,
It violently rolls towards the others like you it has finally found it’s place,
A fragile heart once lost in the deepest ocean, finally found me and we could never be separated, never be broken, Our hearts are twined together like a star joint to the night sky, like the clouds that guide the rain, held so gently, A delicate cloud that cures pain.

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  1. Date: 12/2/2012 1:57:00 PM
    Welcome to Soup Your verses form is Free Verse or Verse, a great set of 6 lines which would be perfect for my 6 line contest. If you are a non-prememium member please make a note at the bottom of your verse I am trying to highlight new members. I look forward to reading more of your work. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 5:40:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Abi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I am sorry it is so belated. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 2:33:00 AM
    Abi a big welcome to the soup, I just love this very romantic write, keep writing...David

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:44:00 PM
    Beautifully written Abi! To find a heart that entwines with your own - that's the essence of love. Very well penned this!

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:24:00 AM
    welcome my kiwi friend, this is awesome.....