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Once In a Blue Moon

A solitary man was he who shunned responsibility and crawled back to his empty shell, he thought himself alive and well. He spurned an opportunity for love in perpetuity, instead his nervousness took hold, he lost the yearning to be bold. As weeks went by he grew, imbued with loneliness and solitude, but not with laughter or the joy he well remembered as a boy. He grew morose, and disinclined to mix with others of his kind, he shut himself away with books, avoiding disapproving looks. Perhaps one day he'll realize commitment is a larger prize, that the way to win a heart is not to run, to be apart. He hopes that day is dawning soon, but, perhaps, it's like the blue moon waiting for its time to rise so infrequently before his eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/9/2014 8:28:00 PM
Love this poem Keith and I am sure many of us can relate to this write. Lovely rhymes and beat in this read. Thank you for sharing!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 7/10/2014 11:56:00 AM
Thanks Suzanne! Your delightful remarks are much appreciated. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 6/27/2014 3:08:00 PM
This is very good. Some men miss out on a lot in life, because they don't a commitment. Some women do to. I have seen both. One day they grow old and have nothing. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 3/14/2014 4:50:00 PM
is this a shorter version of a poem you posted not too long ago? the beginning feels like i've read it before, but i don't remember this title or ending. in any case, it's a wonderful poem and i very much enjoyed it, keith...
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 3/14/2014 5:41:00 PM
Yes. It is a re-post with some alterations. l am in the midst of a serious writer's block so I have to resort to re-posts... GRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!! Thank you for your kind remarks, Ilene! Keith

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