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Once In a Blue Moon

A solitary man was he who shunned responsibility and crawled back to his empty shell, he thought himself alive and well. He spurned an opportunity for love in perpetuity, instead his nervousness took hold, he lost the yearning to be bold. As weeks went by he grew, imbued with loneliness and solitude, but not with laughter or the joy he well remembered as a boy. He grew morose, and disinclined to mix with others of his kind, he shut himself away with books, avoiding disapproving looks. Perhaps one day he'll realize commitment is a larger prize, that the way to win a heart is not to run, to be apart. He hopes that day is dawning soon, but, perhaps, it's like the blue moon waiting for its time to rise so infrequently before his eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/9/2014 9:41:00 AM
Dearest Keith - You are back again, full force. Hooray! These words are written for me today. There is something to be said for joining the human race. "'Perhaps one day he'll realize commitment is a larger prize" Do "they also serve who sit and wait"? I have missed the flow of your phrases, the meaning therein. love, Kathy
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Date: 3/7/2014 11:19:00 PM
Poor soul. The more he withdraws, the worse things will get. Your poet always flows so smoothly!
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Date: 3/7/2014 10:41:00 PM
Hello my friend...so good to see you..I know this feeling...I'm almost back there myself...wonderful words spilling out here...:-) :-)
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