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He exists in the shade of the mandrake plant, It is his only passion in this twisted world; Face down in the dirt- drugged and delirious, Does not care if he wakes up or who walks by; Hey man, it is what it is, just keep walking. Is he alive, better take his pulse, go away, And in his hallucination, a giant with one eye; Takes him up and away, to a high nasty place, Who is he, who was he, of no consequence really; His family tree is lost in a dream, forgotten. He comes in and out of warped dreams horrific, Tears and thoughts of suicide, maybe kill someone; It seems like a real good idea, but he fights it, Cause, hey, God hates a coward like him; He used to play his music, once .. Yeah, once upon a time, he had some pedigree . . _____________________________ March 25, 2016 Poetry/Verse/Once He Had Some Pedigree Copyright Protected, ID 16-771-949-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym Inspiration - Lyrics - God Hates A Coward by Tomahawk For the contest, Lyrics, sponsor, Rob Carmack Sixth Place

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Date: 4/26/2016 3:01:00 PM
Broken Wings, a wonderful poem! congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 4/26/2016 3:14:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats ~
Date: 4/25/2016 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings... Hope you are well...Linda
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Date: 4/26/2016 3:15:00 PM
Linda, thanks so much for the congratulations, oh yes I am quite wonderful !
Date: 4/25/2016 12:44:00 PM
Congrats on your placement, Constancia. hugs.
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Date: 4/25/2016 5:30:00 PM
Moon, thanks for the congrats ~
Date: 4/25/2016 3:28:00 AM
Congrats BW, for your placement with this rich, literary piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/25/2016 9:47:00 AM
Teddy thanks for the congrats and the compliment
Date: 4/24/2016 10:37:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write Broken..
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:39:00 PM
upma thanks for the congrats, the awesome and superb
Date: 4/24/2016 8:50:00 AM
Great interpretation, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:09:00 AM
Sandra, thanks for the congratulations and the hugs ...
Date: 4/23/2016 9:59:00 PM
One of the reasons I chose these lyrics, the variety of interpretations. I liked your poem and thank you for supporting my contests.
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Date: 4/24/2016 7:33:00 AM
Rob, thanks for the great contest, and for my wonderful placement, so appreciated !
Date: 3/26/2016 8:59:00 PM
wow, Constance you are amazing to come up with this. I still don't get it!! Rob should just love this. I did your contest and others today, just not posted quite yet. Scrambling to do comments. Joe is on his way home and yikes, I have little time!!!
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Date: 3/27/2016 10:13:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for visiting with the wow, when I read the lyrics, it just seems like a drug addicted hallucination, hope Rob likes it !
Date: 3/26/2016 7:07:00 AM
We've all seen this guy, hope not many have been him. Vivid, graphically good write B/W...
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Date: 3/26/2016 1:15:00 PM
Charlie, thanks for visiting, yes we see them all around us, and the sad thing is they were all at one time someone's beautiful baby ~
Date: 3/25/2016 8:56:00 PM
Beautiful melancholy Broken.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/25/2016 9:21:00 PM
Timothy, thanks for visiting with the beautiful !

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