Once Again

. . I wake to possibiltiy I walk the walk of anticipation only to find the familiar road of disappointment there are tears but hope

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Lucinda Bulger

Date: 3/21/2009 10:00:00 AM

I know and can relate to especially the statement in the verse "tears of hope" Excellent job in expressing. Best regards always, Lucinda

Daver Austin

Date: 3/21/2009 8:26:00 AM

I hear you. I am forever forming ideas of the way I think things should be, how society should behave. Needless to say, I'm almost always disappointed, disillusioned. Love, daver

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/20/2009 6:08:00 PM

Dear Laurie, Whoa! I must agree with Amy and Sharon "Hope springs Eternal" Yes: "there are tears --- but hope"YOU capture my Heart with this POETIC ART LOVE ALWAYS...HG I Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious comments Especially on YOUR Dedication " If I Could "

Ronald Bingham

Date: 3/20/2009 12:46:00 PM

If you have faith there is always hope. Good one. Blessings, Ron

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 3/20/2009 10:15:00 AM

tears and hope usually go hand and hand very well written

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/20/2009 8:06:00 AM

And whenever there is hope a light is always present at the end of the tunnel..never lose hope.

Arany P.

Date: 3/20/2009 6:41:00 AM

well done! you are so inspirational today!! ~ Arany

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/20/2009 6:32:00 AM

We must never lose that last word of your poem......this could be a motto each of us must remember.....each day's disappointment does not mean there is no hope for a better tomorrow. (We should cross-stitch some of our poems and hang them on the wall!) :)

John Rhinem

Date: 3/20/2009 6:15:00 AM

Smile~Yes, there is hope still is there not!!!?:):) Excellent inspirational write here dear Laurie!!!:):) As long as one keeps their eyes on the prize which lies ahead~then everything else does not really matter quite as much!!!?:):) Smile~I loved Your statement here dear lady~Smile~very sure and very strong!!!:):) Love Always To 'You & Your Loves, John!!!:):)~Have A Glorious & Beautiful Day Dear, Bye!!!:):) Smile....

Amy Swanson

Date: 3/20/2009 5:58:00 AM

Another beautiful one Laurie, a wonderful thought to start my day. I know that road too. I thought the same thing Sharon said, hope springs eternal, yes it does... it's what keeps us going. Sometimes it's all that keeps us going... but it is enough. Really great write. :) Love, Amy

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/20/2009 5:54:00 AM

Hope springs eternal, not to sound cliche, but it is true. Tears, well we are lucky to be able to cry. A beautiful poem. Love, Shar

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/20/2009 4:17:00 AM

a lot of us share these feelings, I'm sure, nice poem! Jim

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/20/2009 4:05:00 AM

Without the tears there are no rainbows, with the lack of fulfillment there is no need to hope. You capture all this in the butterfly catcher of poesy. Love

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 3/20/2009 1:42:00 AM

Very inspirational and O so true. :) Love, Kristin