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Hidden in spaces of my heart Are your charm and eyes that glow Knowing I can’t be apart-- From all that gives me fire of life But now those glances turn away, Turn away, when morning breaks No, no, our times won’t delay This grim pathway of nevermore. ~ Chorus: So for once, let’s embrace a dream To find white roses in the sky, To hold vows through days supreme And waste not fate calling…for once. Then let our yearnings be the light Believe in us , rain or sun I’ll promise you, a love so right My ardent need…for once, be mine. ---------------- Your Best Unacclaimed Pom Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton Written 9/10/2020, Submitted 10/1/2020

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Date: 10/2/2020 9:39:00 AM
A wonderfully touching write congrats Nette on a nice win!
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Date: 9/11/2020 12:38:00 AM
Beautiful, I am curious if this was to a famous song, either way I liked! xoxo
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Date: 9/10/2020 11:59:00 PM
The beat of your words glides sweetly, not too overpowering. Must be the peak of love's story. Splendid!
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Date: 9/10/2020 11:27:00 PM
Beautifully written Nette. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Date: 9/10/2020 10:56:00 PM
Will you be content with once :) Unless that once spells infinity. You have a way with love poems. Unfortunately my love days are over now. ~~
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