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On Your Final Day

on your final day you spoke of one condition memories stay kept in your final breath inhale sad, exhale relief whispers of goodbye on your final quill guilt read like sorrow fulfilled letter of farewell Date Written: August 8, 2016

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Date: 8/8/2016 3:50:00 PM
a sad but lovely write, Laura. i noticed there were two new contests going. I need to check them out and see if you were writing this for one of them.
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Date: 8/8/2016 8:06:00 PM
oh no, I wrote this at 4:00 am this morning lol not for a contest :)-luloo

Book: Shattered Sighs