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On West Wittering Beach

Along the golden sands Walking and talking Holding hands Splashing and frolicking On West Wittering we are Hearts thumping Our wants increasing Urges pumping A blanket we spread On the sands of time As we lie together Our bodies primed Our hands in wander All over we roam Our lips melted in kiss As they find their way home Under the clear blue sky Our flesh is revealed Two lovers in join Our unity sealed In rhythmic rhythm On the sands we dance The breakers applaud To our loving romance The wind whistles Over our curves in delight In a crescendo of joy Our inner lava ignites As we lay on the blanket On the West Wittering sands We were orchestral in love With our wandering hands http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-7.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/13/2010 2:07:00 PM
Yes brings back memeories of the moon lit swamp of new jersy very romantic like vampires except not really. great write please check out my well weird misfits inspired writes please thank you
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Date: 1/24/2010 9:21:00 AM
I will echo DoOris. hot one!!
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Date: 1/23/2010 6:58:00 AM
hot one
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Date: 1/22/2010 6:40:00 PM
Certainly passionate and romantic James.. could just envision the scene and the lovely romantic atmosphere... thankxxx for sharing this lovefest.... enjoyed... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart"
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Date: 1/22/2010 2:56:00 PM
You ignite the reader's "inner lava" in this passionate account of two lovers enjoying the seaside, dear Highlander. Adding the sea into the mix of poetry always seems to produce a winner for you! Great work, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/22/2010 1:08:00 PM
Liked this a lot James had a lovely flw to it will read more of your work much to be admired Daniel
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Date: 1/22/2010 1:07:00 PM
Very passionate write in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. It would be kinda cool on the beach here today but I guess love could keep two warm. Sara
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