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I am on my way to happiness today I am on my way to what I wanted from this world, dear I took a right,a right turning for the best, yesterday I took the road that brought me to your hometown. I took the bus,to streets that I could walk down, I walked those streets to find what I've looked for, And climbed the stairs that led me to your front door, And I'll do my best,I'll do my best to do the best I can To keep my feet,from jumping up and down from the ground, To keep my heart,from jumping through my mouth, my dear, And now,that I don't want for anything anymore, I'd have Al Joison,sing,"I am on top to the world" And it's all because of you,because now,I do have you, In my life forever and ever, my sweet Dear. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,13,2014

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Date: 11/13/2014 6:44:00 PM
Very lovely Dorian.
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Date: 11/13/2014 6:48:00 PM
Thank you Brenda! :) Xxxxx D
Date: 11/13/2014 3:53:00 PM
"D" . . . Oh so beautiful here My Dear. This one got my blood pressure up a bit and got my blood with passion pumping too!! You touch at the end with the reference to "Al Jolson" is just perfect. A "7" and a Fav from me!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary (XOXO)
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Date: 11/13/2014 6:50:00 PM
Thank you very kindly Gary my dear friend! Much appreciated. :) xxxxx D.
Date: 11/13/2014 2:59:00 PM
How loving Dorian...hugs Tim
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Date: 11/13/2014 6:52:00 PM
O Tim thank you so kindly! :) xxxx D.

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