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On This Grayish, Black and White Day

She runs to top the hill and listen for songbirds. On this grayish, black and white scene, there are only crows in the sky, screeching like a hawk who has eyed a snake. What is that rustling sound? Is there a snake? She runs. The leaves atop the trees rustle now and snicker when she trips over fallen limbs. The darksome clouds release their hold of rain on this grayish, black and white scene. Despising the day, she crawls home, cursing the leaves. April 28, 2023 Sponsor Sotto Poet Contest Name UP TO 20 LINES

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Date: 5/3/2023 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day..................
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Date: 5/4/2023 12:55:00 PM
I thank you, Paula. It's always nice to have a positive reply. Enjoy your day and evening.
Date: 5/3/2023 10:49:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, R.A.P. :)
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Date: 5/4/2023 12:56:00 PM
I welcome your commendation, Anne-Lise. May your day be filled with poetry, both yours and ours.
Date: 5/2/2023 9:30:00 PM
Congratulations on writing such a great poem with poetry's elegance in my contest.
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Date: 5/4/2023 12:57:00 PM
My sincere appreciation, Sotto, for the placement in your contest and for a positive supportive comment. May your next write be the best yet.

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