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On This Day Till Forever Ends

On this day I give my heart to my best friend, With our hands joined We’ll walk till forever ends. On this day We share the love in our hearts, And on this day Our new life together starts. On this day We celebrate with family and friends, Our love is a treasure The pot of gold at rainbow’s end. On this day We two shall become one, Our love shines brightly Even when the day is done. On this day I will marry my true love, A special blessing Sent down from above. On this day I vow to honor and love my best friend, In sickness and in health Till forever ends.

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Date: 8/16/2009 8:03:00 AM
This is an excellent, wonderful piece, you are a wonderful poet I love the flow of words… please keep the flag flying and congratulations on a well deserved feature of the week. You are great friend!. Adeleke
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Date: 8/11/2009 1:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Deborah>>James
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Date: 8/11/2009 10:35:00 AM
Wow..this is an amazing poem! I love it:]
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Date: 8/11/2009 3:36:00 AM
a great write, congratulations on your featured poem God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/10/2009 4:58:00 AM
Deborah - I wish to congratulate you on having your poetry featured this week – God bless you, MJ
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Date: 8/10/2009 4:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2009 1:10:00 PM
Beautiful poetic love- Congratulations on being featured, Deborah Keep writing! DAS-J
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Date: 8/9/2009 12:47:00 PM
Uplifting view. Sounds like love to me. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/3/2009 11:04:00 AM
Beautiful write to a dear friend,>>James
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