On the Wings of Dawn

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Dawn is just a few minutes before this scene really..When the first light of day cracks the horizon..Sara

There's dawn on the horizon breaking forth, please come with me let's jump on and ride away. Ride on those wings of dawn. Ride to heights above and play. Blessing each one with new day. Full of color, full of warmth full of promise of happiness.. Come again with me let's go.. Another day let's ride on dawn over rocky mountain heights, forest of trees, desserts, plains bringing to each unclouded day.. Come, come with me let's ride dawn see sleepy people yawn.. Children in front of TV Early in the day, alone Let's ride dawn..... Based on Psalms 139: 9 When searching my unfinished works, I found this one..Carol's contest is closed though.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/20/2011 11:50:00 AM

magnificent inspiration from a beautiful Psalm Sara.. and a wonderful expression of visual grandeur my friend.. peace and tranquility..luv..

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 9/20/2011 1:01:00 AM

The best time of the day undoubtedly, a very nice write. Thanks for your kind comments too, they've helped me come across a wonderful poet such as you, and have given me the opportunity to read your great works...rgds Hussain

William Crocker

Date: 9/19/2011 3:16:00 PM

Sara,I found myself moving from the darkness into the dawn you write about.A very Inspiational piece . Thanks -Crossfox

Steven Cooke

Date: 9/18/2011 3:34:00 PM

reminds me of soaring eagles crossing some mountain range. i like this, good poetry

Kevin Clark

Date: 9/18/2011 2:30:00 PM

Very warm lighted poem nicely done

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 9/18/2011 2:08:00 PM

A very beautiful and inspirational write Sara.. i luv it..thanks so much for sharing this lovely piece...smiles...chiquita

Kash Poet

Date: 9/18/2011 11:51:00 AM

Very uplifting and Inspirational write here Sara.Enjoyed reading it.

Constance La France

Date: 9/18/2011 10:38:00 AM

Sara, this poem is just lovely, is there anything more refreshing than a beautiful dawn, each one a new beginning perhaps, I love this poem and I am sure it would have been a winner if entered and thanks for all your kind comments on my poetry~~

Jack Horne

Date: 9/18/2011 9:30:00 AM

I'm not familiar with those psalms but what a sweet piece - and a pity Carol's contest filled before you could enter (I've written/posted just too late for contests before)