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On the Spot Poem 1

I want to post a poem that i'm making up right now i want to see if everyday i can i know i know how. so this one is the first one tomorrows will have much more i'm just letting you all know so you don't think i'm a bore. i have many things to say doesn't always come out right i do always mean well and i love to make peoples day bright. i have three kids i love ages 14,8, and 3 they all keep me on my feet but i know they all love me . that's all i have for now i will be back again to share more and read others work i love being on this its awesome for sure. 23-5-2016

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/23/2016 6:33:00 AM

Hayley ,, good verse... but I have a question. Why is this under ABC form? You are a talented writer, I hope you consider changing the form. Thanks... Linda

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 5/22/2016 1:24:00 PM

First, thank you for your kind words on my poem! If this is a made up on the spot poem, then Hayley..."Write On" and keep on writing on because you do have something to say and to share! I do look forward to reading your works!!! Write On!!! :-)