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On the Promenade

Tour boat, ferry, sailboat, skiff Bounce along the briny; Sunshine sparkles on the waves, Reflections bright and shiny. Blimp and copter in the sky Meeting no resistance; Bridge, majestic, guarding all – A pillar in the distance. Police boat passes, pulsing blue And beeps at people waving; Children, on a trip from school, Reluctantly behaving. Downtown on the promenade, The river slowly flowing; I soak up my surroundings, Glad for time before my going.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/26/2016 5:45:00 PM
Reluctantly behaving, the little darlin's. :)
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Date: 5/26/2016 4:27:00 PM
Such a vibrant descriptive write - you brought the promenade to life:-) It sounds a lot bustling and busy than on our quiet little Isalnd hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 5/26/2016 3:04:00 AM
You are so....expressive, dear. This was a lovely write...I saw it all in my mind's eye. Hugs
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Date: 5/25/2016 9:41:00 PM
I love the promenade! The one alongside the beach at Rio was SO nice!!
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Date: 5/25/2016 7:25:00 PM
I can just picture the New York scenery! Nice poem about it!:)
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Date: 5/25/2016 4:02:00 PM
Great rhythms again. Very catchy like a song.
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