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On the Outside Looking In

There is a girl With sparkling eyes A peaceful disposition A brilliant mind She is beautiful Who is this girl? No one knows But I know I also know her pain I know her sadness, loneliness How she is addicted to it Wondering if she will ever be whole I know her heavy heart Waiting for the day it will feel again I know her pensive mind Exploding with silent screams wishing to break out I know her guilty eyes, flooding with tears I know this girl Who is wishing for the day when the pain will subside I know her Because her and I, are one

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Date: 4/2/2014 5:37:00 PM
M. B., Congratulations on your winning poem.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 4/1/2014 1:37:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and nice take, congrats on the fine win, m.b.
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Date: 3/31/2014 5:56:00 PM
I could relate to your poem. You expressed your emotions really well here. I loved the twist at the end, when you revealed that you were describing yourself. A great poem! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/21/2014 2:36:00 PM
This is a beautifully written and touching poem. I like it a lot. x
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