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On the Line

Searching for the fountain of youth and the wisdom of time/ emotional intellect I combine the heart and the mind/I reside on the line between humbleness and pride/where hope and despair divide and force you to choose sides/

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/17/2010 10:50:00 AM
enjoyed reading your work and thanks for the comments on my silliness.
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Date: 10/2/2010 10:57:00 AM
An interesting write, Michael. Enjoyed
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Date: 10/2/2010 8:32:00 AM
Very creative and interesting narrative on the,line, michael
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Date: 10/2/2010 8:03:00 AM
Nice Rhyme Royal, very enjoyed today...
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