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On the Edge of a Dream

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On the Edge of a Dream

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Legs and feet are in stocks, no sound from my voicebox 
at one edge of a dream, I want to scream.
On the other side lies long-awaited surprise
After panting upstream, pushing sweat to extreme
my voice  unlocks, "She's beautiful!" Motherhood rocks.


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  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:09:00 AM
    Belated congratulations on your winning spot Reason xx

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:35:00 PM
    Too too..unique, special, unexpected to be higher but for me it should have been much higher ;) [the road less traveled is oft lonely ;)] Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 6:04:00 PM
    Hi, Reason, I am just seeing my winners by typing in the title of all the entries called On the Edge of a Dream , because the winners list won't come up for my contest. If I recall, yours placed either 7th or 8th. It was very different from the others the way you took the theme to to motherhood!! Congrats in my contest.