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On the Cindered Shoulders of Confused Men

“Fire burning in a hill The lines are rocky rough Red angels wait to pick remains The cindered shoulder Of confused men” (Peter Murphy)
"On the Cindered Shoulders of Confused Men"
Close your eyes it was all just a bad dream Burnt you in Hell back then you were just a child Remember when? When you were a child? Then why repeat Hell again? The Lewis Trap kills all your blue biting crazed blow flies, they infected every egg The Custard Cream Molasses Black of your Candyman sins Through a child’s eyes You are staring at your turned back in the mirror again Your reflection walks away from you every now and then Close your eyes go back to sleep again it was all just a bad dream Simon Peter Fisher of Men Peter Simon Somewhere in another dream two very different men Wolf hangs his head The Dark Monk lives on again no friend always walking alone through unforgiving mirrors lost in Purgatory forgiven but never more to be written (Lovejoy-Burton, August 2018)
"A lie can travel half way around the world while the truth is putting on its shoes". - Some Clergyman (Charles Spurgeon)
"His heaven is uncovered not A black tree blocks his way His way is skating round a dome (His way is in dismay) The playmate sings Like Orphee in some thunder world Asking to be bathed in light To be exemplified" - Peter Murphy "Saw his past He had dug for trust With blind infected hands And wondered as the hurt bit hard Why the sacred weren't at hand" - Peter Murphy
1. https://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/petermurphy/indigoeyes.html 2. Orphee/shortened version of Orpheus; or feminine version of Orpheus. 3. Orpheus and Eurydice The most famous story in which Orpheus figures is that of his wife Eurydice (sometimes referred to as Euridice and also known as Argiope). While walking among her people, the Cicones, in tall grass at her wedding, Eurydice was set upon by a satyr. In her efforts to escape the satyr, Eurydice fell into a nest of vipers and suffered a fatal bite on her heel. Her body was discovered by Orpheus who, overcome with grief, played such sad and mournful songs that all the nymphs and gods wept. On their advice, Orpheus travelled to the underworld. His music softened the hearts of Hades and Persephone, who agreed to allow Eurydice to return with him to earth on one condition: he should walk in front of her and not look back until they both had reached the upper world. He set off with Eurydice following, and, in his anxiety, as soon as he reached the upper world, he turned to look at her, forgetting that both needed to be in the upper world, and she vanished for the second time, but now forever.

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Date: 8/14/2018 1:08:00 AM
Phew! You put a lot into this. Deeply impressed. The passion using biblical theme mixed with sex and lust and ominous overtones put your muse into overdrive. You said some things on my Afrikaans poem that was so darling of you. Send me your email address. Sweet thing
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 8/14/2018 3:20:00 AM
Dare I? Perhaps. Of course the Google translate probably pales in comparison to your telling. Thank you for your kind comment, but maybe a bit off the mark. Later Aligator. You CAN write and your stories are exceptional. x
Date: 8/13/2018 8:40:00 PM
Such a deep and profound free verse, my friend.. Extremely mysterious and unique.. Amazing!! Many blessings to you!!
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 8/13/2018 11:58:00 PM
Thank you Robertina.
Date: 8/13/2018 5:49:00 AM
A great write, Leanne! A very deep poem!
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 8/13/2018 6:24:00 AM
Thank you Kim.

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