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On Retirement

Retiring or retirement
An innovation  to graduation
Whether it be retirement or graduation
There’ll be definitely another actions coming.

Retirement is seeking another endeavor
Why the thought you are in a junction
If we go on the negative of retiring
Then turn passiveness the next time.

So, if you are really tired
Then leap another through
Of tiring or resting
Therefore, you are not in  a crossroad
But between active rather than passive!

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  1. Date: 9/18/2011 12:46:00 AM
    WEll, all I know,Dalila, is that I was really looking foward to my retirement years, but nowadays I see only hopelessness, and more night snakes crawling around hubbie. haha. (not really funny but it's life!)

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 9:44:00 PM
    Interesting write good perspective on choices...with love....old Jack