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on ode to the temple

	As the water flows down here with a cool gurgling sound,
	the temple stands majestic , holding its ground.
	silent spectators of yore, the ancient trees,
	all the birds and even the bees,
	Art in the rocks, and art in the stones,
	did they endure,without a groan,
	the temple here , is a land mark they say,
	sometimes take the unbeaten path,spare a while,
	to come this way

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  1. Date: 5/3/2012 4:48:00 AM
    Another amazing write,keep up the great work!!!..... Elliott....

    Desai Avatar Aseem Desai
    Date: 5/3/2012 5:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks , will keep trying