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On My Tv

on my tv a sticky handprint her small coffin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/7/2012 8:16:00 PM
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Charles. I saw the remark below. I understood this one but I think the problem is that the two "episodes" are not side by side. I mean, the small coffin would be better to use in conjunction with another "picture" of something near the graveyard or at the funeral home. I liked the idea here, just thought the two ideas needed to be more closely related in time.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2012 5:32:00 AM
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Well done Charles..... - hug from Anne-Lise
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Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet
Date: 6/2/2012 1:04:00 AM
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Superb Haiku....Soup mail....
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