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On My First Inkling of Soaring Words

A gift received when I was young I have no more. It sparked my interest though it was so deep. Its verse was somewhat prose; its words would soar straight to my soul and not put me to sleep! Kahil Gibran, its author, was most wise. Part poet and philosopher was he. Another book I got, also a prize, contained more feminine type poetry. Its thoughts were clear; it was a sweet book of romantic verse with metaphors sublime! Sara Teasdale’s title, “For Those Who Love,” enthralled me with pure poetry in rhyme. I never could have known it then, but I, would also one day see my own words fly! Written Aug. 2016 For 'A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE no 1213' Poetry Contest

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/11/2016 5:01:00 PM

Hi Andrea, another excellent sonnet but that is always what i expect from you. Already you fly so high. Your words fly through Heaven's domain and into the hearts of all who read. When it comes to poetry you shall not be coming down until you wish. You know well how to write such wonderful sonnets. Good uck in the contest. This has to be a seven and it sings its way through the sky into my faves. Hugs....Mike. XX

Constance La France

Date: 8/10/2016 9:07:00 AM

Andrea this is beautifully penned and meaningful, well done and best of luck in the contest ~

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/9/2016 1:39:00 AM

A lovely write on a wonderful theme:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2016 2:48:00 PM

- One day ..... Andrea :) .... your words will fly freely and easily - Your words will be read by many, you already have the gift :) - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Francis J Grasso

Date: 8/8/2016 10:59:00 AM

Two of my favorite poets! Lovely poem, Andrea.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/8/2016 10:41:00 AM

Another poem another chapter in your life Andrea, and how well you portray these wonders,

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/8/2016 9:21:00 AM

I love this Andrea. I was going to write about finding Lord Byron's first edition book in a little second hand bookstore in Sydney that changed my life and began my journey into the poetry world. We sure are kindred spirits. This is beautiful! 7 ; )

Supraja Kannan

Date: 8/8/2016 6:25:00 AM

Oh..This is great... A lovely poem and an apt title...Good luck in the contest....

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/7/2016 10:04:00 PM

Soon. Viv x

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/7/2016 4:38:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I love Khalil Gibran and can see how this would be life changing! Love the poem. I keep thinking that I am not just impressed by your poetry, but also by your productivity. So many poems, wow! Agnes

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/7/2016 1:57:00 PM

Hi Andrea, This is a good entry for the contest. Poetry did wonders for my life. I wouldn't mind reading those books you mentioned. I don't know Kahil Gibran, he sounds amazing. Great job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A Big seven:-) Alexis