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On My Cloud

On my cloud While playing with the rainbow, Didn’t realize when I slipped down. Tried making others laugh Instead got their frown. Tried touching stone in diamond But hard cheese was playing at other end Tried freeing my soul from pain But all hands I tried were in vain Brain surrendered but Dreams still ran in blood. This opened the eyes of the power Which were at time shut. Tears of heart melt Some compassion just crept. Again dry heart touched some dew. Again the world seemed to be new The generous power heard the loud I am back again on my cloud.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/13/2018 11:12:00 AM
Stay on that cloud Payal, and keep writing...
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Date: 1/9/2018 11:19:00 PM
Thank you Linda. I am thankful to you for reading my poem once again.
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Date: 1/9/2018 12:14:00 PM
Payal, this is very good poem, I am so glad to read this one again... the best I've read today. Enjoyed reading your poem today. ~LINDA~
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Payal Saxena
Date: 1/9/2018 11:22:00 PM
Thank you Linda. I am thankful to you for reading my poem once again.
Date: 1/8/2018 6:10:00 PM
Hi Payal, I have noticed you haven't written since 2015, well all I can say please continue to write because this is a very good poem, we would all like to see more from you, Have a HAPPY NEW YEAR and take care.......Vera
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Payal Saxena
Date: 1/9/2018 2:20:00 AM
Thank you for appreciating and motivating me. Will come back soon with a new writing. Happy New year to you too.
Date: 1/8/2018 10:07:00 AM
I enjoy your concept and well presented in best words for the purpose. Good write, friend.
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Payal Saxena
Date: 1/9/2018 2:19:00 AM
Thank you very muhch for appreciating my efforts sir.
Date: 2/21/2016 8:11:00 PM
Payal, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Payal Saxena
Date: 2/21/2016 10:18:00 PM
Thank You Linda. Will try my best to keep up to your expectations.
Date: 2/15/2016 2:27:00 PM
Beautiful. I hope one day you cloud will rain down the beauty that is evolving in your poetic mind. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe
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Payal Saxena
Date: 2/21/2016 10:24:00 PM
Thank you for your appreciation.
Date: 1/26/2016 7:40:00 PM
A beautiful poem
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Payal Saxena
Date: 2/21/2016 10:25:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 12/30/2015 4:44:00 PM
Payla, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
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Payal Saxena
Date: 2/21/2016 10:26:00 PM
Thank you. Wishing you too a very happy new year ahead.

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