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On Monday

where are you? the water is cold our moment is gone the lights shut down even if we wait for another bus all seats are taken the road is closed the moon can't wait the things you said can't erase itself your lies are true you caught me I held your hand to help me stand you made me fall where are you? I am cold the moment is gone you are gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/27/2012 9:22:00 PM
Elektra, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Keep the good verses coming... take care & good night :-) PD
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Date: 11/26/2012 2:31:00 PM
I like the way you relate your passion to the moment. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 11/22/2012 12:44:00 PM
A touching - well written poem Elektra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/22/2012 11:23:00 AM
i feel your sadness. wishing you hapiness today. happy thanksgiving.
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