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On Monarch's Wings

Upon monarch's wings and morning dew a summer day has come to you Scent of rose on lilac breeze Is wafting through the trees Butterflies float by 'Neath azure skies As birds sing Their sweet Songs

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 6/12/2014 4:07:00 PM

Beautiful images and form. Summer does fly in on butterfly wings. Congratulations on a fine winning poem. SuZ

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 9:40:00 AM

NICE WIN MY FRIEND...PD

Saba Khan

Date: 6/8/2014 11:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your win ! :) Wishes---

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/8/2014 5:23:00 AM

Congratulations Joseph.. :) i knew this will do well.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/5/2014 10:45:00 PM

Congratulations on a fine win with this perfect Nonet, Joseph

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2014 9:39:00 PM

BIG congrats on your win, joseph!

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 6/5/2014 1:40:00 PM

Very pretty; nice imagery. Congrats on win.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/5/2014 9:45:00 AM

Uplifting and beautiful...a beautiful poem, Joseph !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/5/2014 8:41:00 AM

Awesome write Joseph ! Congrats on great win !

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/5/2014 8:17:00 AM

Beautiful piece, I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations.

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/5/2014 8:14:00 AM

OOO beautiful. I love the images, your words dance so well, Well done, and great win in the contest. :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/5/2014 6:58:00 AM

Thank you for sharing this beautiful write with magnificent imagery! Congratulations on a great win!

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/5/2014 6:29:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Joseph!!... Such a beautiful write... Arlene..

Tim Smith

Date: 6/5/2014 3:40:00 AM

Congrats my friend on the third place win....Tim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2014 3:07:00 PM

awesome, you have GOT the centering down!!!

Joseph May
Date: 6/4/2014 5:51:00 PM

Yeahh...Thank you so much Andrea...hugs

Elaine George

Date: 6/4/2014 6:02:00 AM

Sensation Nonet, Joe. I hope you have entered it in the Nonet contest. A inner for sure. Lainie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/3/2014 7:51:00 PM

Very nice Joe yes you can go fix it again in the edit place! Thanks for stopping by! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2014 4:15:00 PM

okay, I see you have tried to center. I think you maybe did one thing wrong that made the first line off center. Don't try to change your lines. Just place that first symbol right in front of your first line and don't move that line at all. Keep everything the same. Just put the symbols right in the front of that first line. I really want to blog about centering but I am at school and need to get home. this was a sweet poem, by the way.

Joseph May
Date: 6/3/2014 4:42:00 PM

I think that's where I went wrong, I did try to change the lines. Can it be fixed or should I do it over?

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/3/2014 6:55:00 AM

creative picture or beauty.. :) i love the way you end it, adding the bird's singing make it more enchanting.. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2014 8:57:00 PM

I think Freddie asked for it centered, maybe I am wrong.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2014 8:57:00 PM

this is really nice, but have you tried to center it yet?? If you give me your email at soupmail, I will try to give you instructions in an email. When I use those same symbols in soupmail, it goes to ERROR and won't let me mail the soupmail. SO WEIRD.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/2/2014 1:33:00 PM

whimsical and truly engaging, joseph...melodious tone well done.. huggs

Ct Duet

Date: 6/1/2014 3:18:00 PM

Wonderful Joseph...Good luck in the contest my friend