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On Meeting Most Beautiful

On meeting most beautiful adoring maiden kisses in thoughts Deeply inhaling one warm breath a sip off the finest old grog auld mountain dew breathing pure Golden leaves sweetly float dancing twirl Shining inside vision sweet walking hand in hand on golden sands waves unfold a carpet blue to white ebbing thoughts pure crashing love Against the deepest walls warm soft light silent echoes whisper true sweetly melting emotions Brewing kisses clouds peach fading out to shades of grey tuning kiss Silver treasuring thoughts I love you peachy beautiful dream gem dancing petal flowers one red rose I have visions of you dancing in my dreams as I sleep most wonderfully on soft clouds in the azure sky At times I gaze skyward on days bright and beautiful seeing your face in the sky and feeling always your most wonderful presence like texture and scent of most sensual red rose petals gently landing on the sweet dew ground On meeting you most beautiful maiden my thoughts always turn most instantly to love and happiness with my emotions and my soul on fire in storms of unbridled passion and pleasure I can only say I love you forever and forever Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Free Verse Poem November 13, 2014

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Date: 11/13/2014 11:49:00 PM
this is so lovely and romantic piece Gary and Liam! have a wonderful day to both of you...
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/14/2014 1:54:00 PM
Thanks Katrina, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/14/2014 4:05:00 AM
katrina you also have a wonderful day heartfelt beautiful comment bless you
Date: 11/13/2014 8:54:00 PM
A beautiful collab from the two of you! I would have never known...hugs, Rhonda
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/14/2014 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Rhonda!! Gary (Sorry I got my responses mixed up a bit here.)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/14/2014 1:58:00 PM
Thanks Katrina, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/14/2014 2:49:00 AM
rhonda thank you dear friend for the very beautiful comment bless you
Date: 11/13/2014 2:00:00 PM
rate 7 from me to you! :-) sorry I forgot it before Liam
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Date: 11/13/2014 1:52:00 PM
My dear friend Liam, this is a most beautiful love poem filled of so much love and romance . you and Gary are a great writing team! Keep your golden pen flowing through forever. :-) love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 2:19:00 PM
thank you kindly dorian dear friend truly beautiful comment gary really done a marvelous job on this bless you
Date: 11/13/2014 11:41:00 AM
Well done both of you!! Honestly I did not realize two pens were involved in writing this peach of a poem....not till I came right to the bottom! Beautiful and captivating imagery. This must be love!! (a top rating, of course!) // paul
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/14/2014 2:53:00 PM
Thanks Paul!! Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 2:15:00 PM
wonderful comment paul thank you ever so kindly dear friend truly heartfelt with gary's pen it really blossomed out bless you pal
Date: 11/13/2014 11:18:00 AM
Usual good stuff Liam!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 2:10:00 PM
thank you ken dear pal always great to see you
Date: 11/13/2014 7:08:00 AM
superb write.. ! wowowooww! you two are amazing!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 11:22:00 AM
thank you so much olive heartfelt beautiful comment bless you
Date: 11/13/2014 5:57:00 AM
This is a fine single malt scot whiskey -- smoky, smooth, and intoxicating. Outstanding -- just the thing for a cold day to warm me up.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 6:35:00 AM
it sure is to heat the cockles of the heart david wonderful comment deeply appreciated pal
Date: 11/13/2014 5:47:00 AM
Great job guys (Liam and Gary). I absolutely love this piece. Great team work and a remarkable end result. A well deserved 7 from me. Warm regards "B"
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/14/2014 2:03:00 PM
Thanks "B." Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 6:26:00 AM
thank you deeply dear friend wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 11/13/2014 4:47:00 AM
wonderful poem Liam. a 7 from me
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 4:51:00 AM
jasmine thank you so kindly for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated gary he spiced this really up with his pen

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