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On Loving a Rock Star - Redux

Lavish locks sprawl pillowed in peace this morn. Gently whiskered cheeks hint of last night's lipstick Tensions banished blue grassy fiddling lingers Let's take it easy I'll make the omelets while you get a shower, dear. Oh? You'd rather play some more? Alright, eats postponed. Pounding rhythms drumming heartbeats Satiation lullaby. In stillness your breath meanders its way through the vast concert hall of my naked vulnerability cooing minor keyed assurances of something finer. Rifts while integral to the theme render our phrasing discordant at times yet your hard earned skill in handling your fender is spawning a wisdom I don't quite get but it soothes and smooths, warms and relaxes us both and though still stressed out by taxes and injustice, fear and idiocy frustrations from others unable to see we remember our gift of harmony and sing our twin souls free of enmity. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The three forms used to construct this poem are Sapphic Stanza, Sedoka, and Sonnet.

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Date: 2/4/2014 6:25:00 AM
Wonderful poem, your favorite one. Congrats on the win, Nancy
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Date: 2/3/2014 5:53:00 PM
nancy, this is a stunning poem and just had to be a 1st place! I don't mind admitting I am envious of this poem! lol the wording and rhyming is flawless - excellent work! congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 2/3/2014 4:47:00 PM
WOWSER! gangbuster line! [your breath meanders its way/through the vast concert hall of my naked /vulnerability cooing minor/keyed assurances] and what a way to blend! If you get a minute please go vote on my blog? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/2/2014 1:00:00 PM
....Ps., I Love Your Beautiful Picture, Nancy.
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Date: 2/2/2014 12:53:00 PM
† A True Poetic Queen: She, The Rock Star....Love John .... Ps., A Most Exquisite As Beautiful Favourite.
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