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On Journeys of the Heart

On Journeys Of The Heart Lost and wandering in the dark Bereft of any map or mark Futile efforts fail at embark On journeys of the heart. Vain travailings silent, unheard Are bound beneath unspoken words Repressing what could still be stirred On journeys of the heart. Still faint intrepid thoughts unfurl Mangled within a broken world Pacing relentless in this pearl On journeys of the heart. 3/4/2012©deborah burch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/2/2012 9:01:00 PM
Indeed the rimester ye be... thoughts to pen set free....
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Date: 4/16/2012 10:17:00 PM
Very insightful poem by you.Congrats on your win.Thanks for your inspiring words at my pages.
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Date: 4/16/2012 12:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest Brian sponsored "XII". You did yourself proud with your grand writing Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2012 12:18:00 PM
writing end rhyme is very hard for me without it getting sing songy. But your refrain has taken most of that away. I would say this is about as good a balance as i have seen for rhyme yet subdueing it to an acceptable level. I think I will try a few like this if I can come up with some good theme. thank you for postisng
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/12/2012 12:37:00 PM
thank you Charles...I am honoured...I am anxious to see the results...very best wishes, huggs,love deb
Date: 4/11/2012 7:20:00 AM
lovely write, my friend. many congrats on your wins
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/11/2012 8:11:00 AM
Thank you for your kindness, Jack...big hugs,love debs

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