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On His Lap

The child sat on his lap (It was her father, I assumed) Until the light turned green and then Across the street they zoomed. She giggled as he mussed her hair; His smile was wide and bright And anyone could see there was A mutual delight. But as they passed I noticed Something one not often sees – The wheelchair gave a glimpse there were No legs below his knees. A tender scene for me, but what That poignancy reveals Is a heart defines a daddy, Whether on his legs or wheels.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/19/2017 7:52:00 PM
On his lap and in his heart. That's all that life requires. To make a life worth every minute and truly, it inspires.
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Date: 1/19/2017 4:52:00 AM
Children just need to feel loved. The appearance doesn't matter. I wish everyone could remain childlike in their judgment as they become adults. I loved the beautiful message in your poem Ilene. ; ) 7
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Date: 1/18/2017 9:38:00 PM
Yes, indeed! This is one of many of your best, Ilene. The rhymes are enviable. I have difficulty finding the right rhyme many times. My "X" poem (I forget the exact name of the form) is third to the last letter in our alphabet. I wrote a poem for each letter some years ago. Am now editing them. Will begin to post others. Thank you for the stop. Much appreciated. / M
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