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On High Waves

upsurge of surfers - on carousel of high waves rides their flamboyance
Date: 09/18/2017

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Date: 10/29/2017 10:21:00 AM
awesome imagery!!
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Date: 10/29/2017 11:06:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 10/28/2017 9:37:00 AM
Great poem Hugs Eve ~`*
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/28/2017 11:26:00 PM
Thanks Eve.
Date: 9/30/2017 9:20:00 AM
A nice Senryu
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/8/2017 9:41:00 AM
Thank you, Tim.
Date: 9/29/2017 8:30:00 AM
Rich imagery, Afzal:) great haiku:)
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/8/2017 9:41:00 AM
Thank you, Jo
Date: 9/23/2017 12:17:00 PM
I agree w/the other talented poets/poetesses ... a beautifully expressed Haiku, Afzal. Your adept pen speak in celestial tones. On carousel of high waves rides their flamboyance ... this is such a shimmering phrase of rich imagery. A masterfully crafted poem, my friend. Pure poetry. Love and more love always.
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 9/27/2017 11:10:00 PM
Thank you very much for such a generous compliment, Freddie.
Date: 9/23/2017 5:19:00 AM
Great haiku Afzal
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 9/27/2017 11:09:00 PM
Thanks S.O.
Date: 9/20/2017 7:51:00 AM
Lot of imagery in three short lines Afzal. Haiku at its best...Maria
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 9/23/2017 1:53:00 AM
Thank you, Maria.
Date: 9/18/2017 11:43:00 AM
Cracking word in conjunction with the Haiku's sentiment..."Flamboyance" - Love it! All my very best regards as always, Afzal. :) john
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 9/23/2017 1:53:00 AM
Thank you, John.

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