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On Going Pain Like Quick Sand

One minute your staring right into the future and then the next your looking into the seven layers of hell. You try and look away when out of the darkness the love you thought you lost is calling out for you. You see them but do they see you looking back? As you stare at them your falling even deeper into the ninth layer. Never really understanding what to do or say. Trying to ecape you seep deeper into the quick sand of your new life. NEVER GETTING OUT! The quick sand is over your head and you go down deeper, when you open your eyes your in a new place. Where no one knows who you are or what you might have done. A world with on going pain just like quick sand we sink. The more we fight the faster we sink. The world is showing you the pain. The world is just like quick sand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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