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On Four Walls

Their young strong-willed son, ever resourceful, has been given "time out" for bad behavior. There is no noise coming from the room. After two hours, the mother grows concerned. Why has there been none of the usual clamor by him to be released from his small prison? As she walks into her child's room, she is startled by the claws of lions which seem to spring from the right side of the room. She spins around with a gasp. On four walls are different animals crouched or ready to pounce. A black panther, which peers at her with huge yellow eyes, takes center stage above the window where it has been drawn in bold crayon strokes as if it were creeping in from the outside to join the landscape of the magnificent lush green jungle applied to the once-white surface of the walls surrounding her. Owls and tropical birds perch on the branches of the jungle trees, and a fat green snake slithers by the door. Her son, finishing up the wall nearest his bed, looks up at her from the piles of crayons strewn across the floor and impishly smiles. Did I mention, he is also very artistic? Written Feb. 22, 2016 For the contest of A.A.

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Date: 3/12/2016 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea, this write captured my attention through till the end. This young man is another Picasso hidden within four walls.
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Date: 3/12/2016 5:30:00 AM
Gotta love them! Reminds me of the artwork I've cleaned off walls. This reads like a warm hug. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/11/2016 4:09:00 PM
LOL, reminds me of a time when I had to repaint a wall. In my case though, it was the living room wall. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/11/2016 3:40:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Andrea
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Date: 3/11/2016 11:41:00 AM
Such a cute ending !!! Sounds like someone I know.....a grandchild of mine!!! Good one, and congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 3/11/2016 11:22:00 AM
Congrats on contest Andrea...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 3/11/2016 10:19:00 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your "4 walls" win.... Love LINDA
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Date: 3/11/2016 10:09:00 AM
thank you
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Date: 3/5/2016 8:30:00 PM
You are ssssoooo creative. This is a great story. I think it is a brilliant poem. I would love to see the concept expanded and written as a children's book. A Super Huge Favorite!
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Date: 3/2/2016 4:22:00 AM
Hi Andrea, can you tell me where the contest is for four walls I cannot find it x has it been judged x
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Date: 2/25/2016 7:53:00 AM
Too bad he wasn't given paint to do his room. What a tale sis. Now she will have to find another way to punish him, too much fun in his room.
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Date: 2/24/2016 8:34:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... an impressive tale Andrea and so well written. Will he be a graffiti artist or paint murals in the future - Lindsay
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Date: 2/24/2016 2:31:00 PM
A great poem x good walls a very good artist Wendy
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Date: 2/24/2016 1:09:00 AM
This was adorable Andrea. I hope it does great in the contest.
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Date: 2/24/2016 12:54:00 AM
Liked this flight of possibility's Andrea, It gives a bright window of view to the reader..'
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Date: 2/24/2016 12:45:00 AM
I really adore the poems you write, when it's centered around children ... this is where you excel in my opinion (and this one has animals too boot!) ... from time-out to Art Class, I felt this to be quite adorable with lovely colorful images. Best of luck.
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Date: 2/23/2016 11:05:00 PM
Your words are perfectly integrated ! I agree with Brian ! This work is exceptional... thank you for reading my poems in the past..i was not very productive for almost 2yrs...hope you can enjoy reading my recent work
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Date: 2/23/2016 8:56:00 PM
This is a exceptional story about the boy and his world!
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Date: 2/23/2016 7:39:00 PM
Andrea there nothing more beautiful than reading a poem that speaks of the poet as much as the poem! Simply wonderful!
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Date: 2/23/2016 6:12:00 PM
Excellent poem, few children enjoy in this way with in four wall. Lovely my friend and good luck,bl
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Date: 2/23/2016 4:01:00 PM
mine would have destroyed the room and just scribbles on the walls
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Date: 2/23/2016 3:49:00 PM
Sweet!It is a little reminiscent of my favorite children's books..Where the Wild Things Are?"...:), jill
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Date: 2/23/2016 3:23:00 PM
I am sure many parents can relate to this one - we were lucky our son never decorated our walls!:-) hugs Jan xx
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