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On Fire Island

We stood upon the ripe Dunes Looking down upon the shorn Tops Of holly trees wading in the Sunken Hiatus, splayed between Ocean And Great South Bay. The lawntrees were Rippling In the fervid air. Then Catlike We plunged into the cool Emerald Arbored depths: Everything is Green Like her sunglasses there. This little poem is another rare piece of juvenilia preserved from my college years at UF (1977-80).

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Date: 12/31/2017 7:50:00 PM
Your poem title caught my eye as I used to go swimming at Fire Island…great poem John!~Che :)
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J P Marmaro
Date: 2/14/2019 7:25:00 PM
Hi-- a MUCH delayed thank you!
Date: 12/31/2017 11:36:00 AM
Wonderful imagery!
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J P Marmaro
Date: 2/14/2019 7:26:00 PM
Hello-- I'd just joined the day I posted this, sorry for the long, LONG delay in thanking you!

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