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On Echo

Sound waves' reflection Words in repetition This is the cicatrix Only time could fix. Echoes are my scars That travels afar Made by wounded voices For others are noises. Heartbreaks retold On echoes so called Marked when uttered Whenever remembered But I remained silent The love that I've spent Aches more when I cry Still there 'til I die So bad but was great The echoes I create Hurt but then learned For lessons I've yearned.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/28/2015 2:37:00 PM
Hansteven, Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/26/2015 4:26:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win Hansteven.. great pen!
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Date: 11/26/2015 8:42:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 11/25/2015 1:16:00 AM
This was my Fav Stanza "Echoes are my scars That travels afar Made by wounded voices For others are noises. Elegant Write on this Poem
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Date: 11/24/2015 5:32:00 PM
Hansteven..congrats on your win in my first contest! :) very emotive and raw..thank you for sharing! :)-lu *smiles*
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Date: 11/24/2015 11:26:00 PM
Thank you so much!!! It's so nice to join your contest. :)
Date: 11/24/2015 5:30:00 PM
WOW, this I love... Especially because you did well on the free verse poem. I like the lesson you learned after so many echoes. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/24/2015 11:24:00 PM
Thank you. I didn't expect to have a place in the contest. :)

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