On Dreams

With head turned to a side Asleep tight yet eyes opened wide Imagination on a wild ride Afloat in the fantasy ocean at high tide Not being needlessly tried Nothing to hide No one to chide The daily shackles untied Absense of any false pride Anxiety just died My heart joyfully cried That feeling of a smooth glide Took but a small stride Sleep after the day's hard toil Awarded 7th place in the "Any Poem #32" Contest by PD

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/12/2015 2:11:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning write Suraj!

Skat A

Date: 8/12/2015 1:58:00 AM

Suraj, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/12/2015 1:17:00 AM

Suraj Congratulations on your wonderful win. Thank you for the support. Stop by my latest blog "BE MINDFUL WHEN YOU WRITE" if you'd like or have time. Once again, thank you. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther

Date: 3/4/2015 6:55:00 PM

Your words did glide miraculously across the page. Great write Suraj. A gleaming 7.

Suraj Jumani
Date: 3/4/2015 8:44:00 PM

Thank you so much for the encouragement Valerie, it means a lot to me to keep me going.